On a balmy afternoon in Ft. Lauderdale after the fall
I write:
“the bees from the hive,
won’t come home alive”
I am sitting, knees up
on a chaise lounge
poolside
golf pencil in hand
writing doggerel poetry
on the back of an envelope
supported by a cocktail menu
that reads (I quote):
Little Ottawa Motel
Your home in The States
The home of the 5 dollar
Dirty Canadian Martini
Tiki bar open till 2AM
Karaoke Saturdays 5 – 7
“they’ve lost their wings,
in a million stings”
it’s four and a half weeks
since Candice went away
to Duluth, to live with
her therapist, Ralph
and 16 days after
Mr. Waters had to be put down
due to a liver condition
and I’d given away
a full box of Kitty-Krunches
and half dozen bags
of Walter Henshaw’s cat nip
to the lady downstairs
with the Siamese
“they’ve buzzed their last,
in a final repast”
a Cuban girl named Debbie
drops a rum and coke off
at my chair and I say to her
that Debbie is not a Cuban name
I demand that she come clean
she smiles, and says if I come back
after 5 she’ll tell me a secret
but she’s full of it – just like my poems
then she takes a ten from me
and walks away toward her next victim
a terribly inflated and bleached
and beached
elderly gentleman
in a lime green thong
“and they now join their brethren,
in insect heaven”
I drain the cocktail, then
wad the envelope
poem and all
into a tight ball
drop it into the empty plastic cup
and hail Debbie
for another round.
Really an excellent poem. One of the best I have read of yours’. The blending of the italicized lines with the theme of the poem as it unfolds is brilliant. Great job !
Thank you, Pete. I’m glad you enjoyed it.
I don’t like Ralph, but Debbie seems nice.
You are a good judge of character, cowboylawyerc. Ralph is certainly not a man of great moral fiber, but Candice is no bargain either. Thank you again for stopping by.